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Cheese Sandwich
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"'scuse me mate, is that the cheese sandwich you've got there?"
"Er, yes"
"Is it any good?"
"It's a cheese sandwich."
"Yeah?"
"Have you ever had a cheese sandwich before?"
"Yeah."
"Did you like it?"
"Yes mate!"
"Then you'll like this cheese sandwich."
"Oh yeah?"
"Yes, because it's a cheese sandwich. It's more or less exactly what you'd expect from a cheese sandwich. If I was to be critical I'd say it was a tad heavy on cheese and a little light on lettuce..."
"Right?"
"But it's still a cheese sandwich."
"Ok mate! Thanks!"
The man strode up to the counter and ordered an English breakfast. Dusty watched impassively.
"Er, yes"
"Is it any good?"
"It's a cheese sandwich."
"Yeah?"
"Have you ever had a cheese sandwich before?"
"Yeah."
"Did you like it?"
"Yes mate!"
"Then you'll like this cheese sandwich."
"Oh yeah?"
"Yes, because it's a cheese sandwich. It's more or less exactly what you'd expect from a cheese sandwich. If I was to be critical I'd say it was a tad heavy on cheese and a little light on lettuce..."
"Right?"
"But it's still a cheese sandwich."
"Ok mate! Thanks!"
The man strode up to the counter and ordered an English breakfast. Dusty watched impassively.
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I'm not sure about the last line, but I felt some sort of conclusion was neccessary.
Edit 6th December 2011. I'd never been satisfied with the ending of this. Re-reading it a year later, I've had an epiphany and removed a few words.
I'm not sure about the last line, but I felt some sort of conclusion was neccessary.
Edit 6th December 2011. I'd never been satisfied with the ending of this. Re-reading it a year later, I've had an epiphany and removed a few words.
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